Title: Warriors: A Murder Mystery

Plot: 9/10
I must admit, this was a very clever plot. As I was scanning through the many Warriors fanfics on fanfiction.net looking for a humorous story to muse me, and this really hit the spot. It was very clever, on the whole, but a very minor tweak to the ending would have been nice, so no perfect score here!

Readability: 9/10
It was funny, clever, and easy to read through, but near the end there was a minor disappointment which made it less enjoyable to finish, but still very funny, and brilliantly thought out!

Mechanics: 7/10
The overall mechanics were not great in this one by any stretch, but there wasn’t anything that would bother you, or make it hard to understand what was going on. A seven fits because there were consistent errors throughout, but nothing dreadful.

Originality: 9/10
To sum this one up quickly, it was written like a classic mystery, but obviously a spoof. As a whole it was very original, but because it was cliché, though again, brilliant, I’m can’t give it a perfect score.

Characters: NA/10
As this was a comedy, I’m not going to grade the characters, as some were portrayed differently than in the books, BUT it was to make the story funny, so no harm no foul.

Description: 8/10
There was plenty of description in this one, and it was mostly very cliché, but there wasn’t much to desired here, basically the job got done, but nothing extra special.

Continuity: 8/10
This was a mystery story, and as such would need to be consistent, even if it was short. There were a few points that were strange, but nothing big, job well done here, at least the main story flowed nicely!

Overall: 83% B
Very clever story, and I think it was better than its grade shows! This is definitely a fic I would recommend to anyone with anything resembling a sense of humor, you’ll definitely get some laughs at the Sherlock Holmes attitude portrayed by Cloudtail, and his ‘I’m the best’ attitude is also very amusing. Click the link and enjoy!

LINK: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3413283/1/