Untitled Review
by Nova
Review: Untitled by Wolfspeed [x]
Reviewed by: Nova
Looks: 8/10
The contrast between foreground and background makes the artwork pleasing to the eye. However, the cat's fur is solid colors and from what I can see, there is only one other color on the cat.
Style: 7/10
The cats are "cartoonish" yet have a realistic look to them. They have heads that are a little bigger than proportionate for their body. The fur has some texture, although the overall cat could have a more three dimensional look if there was shading.
Characters: 6/10
The main character in this comic appears to be Graystripe, but the coloring is incorrect. The other characters are not based on canon characters.
Scene: 2/10
The scene is a simple, background consisting of one or two colors with straight lines. If there were trees or shrubs, the comic would be more interesting. Some of the colors used in the background are not realistic, like bright green.
Poses: 5/10
Most of the poses are exactly the same with a few elements changed, like eye shape. The whiskers and demeanor depicted here do not reflect the cat's emotions. The cats also seem to be looking in the same spot every time. Like in movies, each character should have a front, back, left, right, three-quarters, etc. view.
Originality: 7/10
This art looks like a version of upcoming The Lost Warrior, although it is completely fictional. From what I can tell, it appears to be a continuing comic, like those found in the daily newspaper.
Overall: F (50%) The cats are well drawn, but they overall comic looks like it was rushed. The background is very plain, like something you could do on Microsoft Paint. The text on the art is also grammatically incorrect. If a little more time was spent on the layout of the comic, it would be much more eye catching.